Here are just some of the reasons given for rejection. Some are rather harsh, virulent even.
we neither like nor trust Ben to
the extent that we can’t stand him - he must see the error of his ways and
change
Ted is an unsympathetic
character - his begging for a second chance and saying he's had a change of
heart doesn't ring true
the problem for us is that Dave
sounds too pushy and tiresome
the stumbling block here is that
Henry is so unpleasant - not an engaging character - his later climb down isn’t
really convincing
Creating realistic characters isn’t easy. Do you have any hints as to how it should be done?